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PLEASE
Contributed by
Tiffyo4
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Wednesday, 24th January 2007 @ 01:30:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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please don't let me go
i wanna live and breath
why are you doing this
please don't make me bleed
it hurts so bad and it stings
no not again why there
please don't take my life
i'm on the floor now
in my own dark blood
please don't let me die
i have so much to live for
so much still to do
please please please
is anyone there
anyone who cares
Copyright ©
Tiffyo4
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2007-01-24 13:30:09]
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Re: PLEASE
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by Jen54 on
Wednesday, 24th January 2007 @ 01:51:17 PM AEST
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| Hope you are alright |
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Re: PLEASE
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by joe-joe on
Wednesday, 24th January 2007 @ 02:50:24 PM AEST
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| Every soul on the earth gets low and feels the same way even if we don't admit it, this is a very nice way to vent... |
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Re: PLEASE
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by Bleedthelove on
Wednesday, 24th January 2007 @ 04:34:21 PM AEST
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| Very intense write. |
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Re: PLEASE
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 24th January 2007 @ 08:05:46 PM AEST
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I agree I hope you are ok. The pain within this is a bit hard to take though. Embrace the goodness and move with it. Hope you are ok.
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