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Sea of Emotions
Contributed by
DrowningHeart
on
Wednesday, 24th January 2007 @ 11:16:41 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Grey waters fill my eyes
Sinking
Slowly
Drowning
Looking up to the skies
I can see the light
and I refuse to fight
Lost within this sea of emotions
Isolation, depression
I have released into this ocean
Swallow me whole, compressed here
These grey waters now a crystal blue
Once painful memories, are now erased
Finally I have been embraced.
Copyright ©
DrowningHeart
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2007-01-24 11:16:41]
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Re: Sea of Emotions
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by UrMyInspiration on
Wednesday, 24th January 2007 @ 01:05:55 PM AEST
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| This is very touching poetry. I can relate. "Finally I have been embraced"... This line gave me chills. |
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Re: Sea of Emotions
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by Tiffyo4 on
Wednesday, 24th January 2007 @ 01:39:16 PM AEST
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| wow the hairs on the back of my neck stood up very nice work |
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Re: Sea of Emotions
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 24th January 2007 @ 02:09:00 PM AEST
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Get out and into the light you are always embraced hun. Beautiful write.
~Michelle~ |
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Re: Sea of Emotions
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by Crow on
Wednesday, 24th January 2007 @ 03:51:06 PM AEST
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so sad, a fight to the very end..I read your comment on my write, if you get to down"
yell, I can`t dance, but i`ll sing for ya"
la, la, la.......la. hows that...
it is a beautiful write Crow |
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Re: Sea of Emotions
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by Jen54 on
Wednesday, 24th January 2007 @ 11:50:11 PM AEST
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wow that was intense. I could feel the change and love this poem so much. Wonderful write.
-Jen |
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