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Cold Minutes
Contributed by
crow
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Wednesday, 24th January 2007 @ 09:58:24 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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The wood has grayed
many years of weather,
fighting Winter, July boils,
and the rain"
Comfort on the old back-steps
twisted some, but sturdy.
Dark clouds move across
lighter shades,
or is it the world moving around
charcoal splashes.
Rain..doesn`t it seem searing at times.
I fought the day to bring me here,
the cold minutes spent alone...
no one to watch the rain"...Vincent
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crow
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2007-01-24 09:58:24]
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Re: Cold Minutes
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by DrowningHeart on
Wednesday, 24th January 2007 @ 10:08:37 AM AEST
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Such a simple pleasure and no one to share it with, quite sad. This is very much how I feel as well.
Blessed be
D |
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Re: Cold Minutes
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by PhantomVampyress on
Wednesday, 24th January 2007 @ 10:16:45 AM AEST
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wow a very powerful yet moving write.. awesome job
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Re: Cold Minutes
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Wednesday, 24th January 2007 @ 04:34:06 PM AEST
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Sadness evokes the heart of your reader as they read this my friend. Rain it brings me such a peaceful feeling within myself, but it's so sad when you have nobody to share such moments with. A moving piece captured with your mighty pen~ Well done.
hugs n prayers,
sue m |
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Re: Cold Minutes
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by deadheadpoet on
Thursday, 25th January 2007 @ 04:42:10 PM AEST
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Love, love, love this write, Vincent. Especially that first stanza,
"comfort on the old back-steps
twisted some, but sturdy"
reminds me of this beautiful old farm house I live in. Your writes are so damn down to earth. You have quickly jumped on my list of favorite YPDC poets. Thanks for sharing.
Peace, Laura |
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Re: Cold Minutes
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by myheartsvoice on
Friday, 26th January 2007 @ 05:15:20 PM AEST
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Your off to a good start, you have your own style. a plus to any art form. Well crafted nice presentation along with a relatable content .
Thanks also for the comment.
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