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Powder Blue'
Contributed by
crow
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Wednesday, 24th January 2007 @ 09:45:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Warm your heart,
listen to words soft and low.
Close your eyes, gentle touch,
I`ll be your breath in the dark"
Miss the hand"
from a minute before,
tell me to hurry" but spend everyday,
find that whisper so deep in your mind
let it burn to our very souls.
Every color imagined,
fits as the night gains day..
every feeling you leave in me...
that beautiful Powder Blue...Vincent
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crow
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2007-01-24 09:45:00]
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Re: Powder Blue'
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by DrowningHeart on
Wednesday, 24th January 2007 @ 10:10:56 AM AEST
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Lovely, I can close my eye and imagine this you have penned so beautifilly.
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Re: Powder Blue'
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by PhantomVampyress on
Wednesday, 24th January 2007 @ 10:18:43 AM AEST
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great imagery and feeling in this piece.. I like the stanzas and the flow of it.. awesome job
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Re: Powder Blue'
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 24th January 2007 @ 12:22:31 PM AEST
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Serene I get from this.
I'll be your breath in the dark loved that line.
We all need that.
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Re: Powder Blue'
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Wednesday, 24th January 2007 @ 04:28:33 PM AEST
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A tranquil and peaceful feeling overcomes the reader when reading this. The imagery you cast into the readers head is absolutely beautiful~ A write that warms the heart. Penned beautifully as always. Thanks for posting it~
many hugs,
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Re: Powder Blue'
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by deadheadpoet on
Thursday, 25th January 2007 @ 04:59:26 PM AEST
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Nice. Serene. Tender and loving. That is the feelings I got ready this beautiful little piece. I really loved this line...
"Close your eyes, gentle touch
I'll be your breath in the dark"
That's just romantic sounding.
Peace and hugs,
Laura |
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