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Deam Lover
Contributed by
ShadowsCloud
on
Friday, 21st February 2003 @ 12:30:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Nuance of spirit
takes flight into the night
towards a beckoning heart.
Feathered touches
caress my skin
within the ambiance of dream.
Whispered words echo
deep in the realm
where to hearts beat as one.
Breathing your sent
I climb toward heaven
enraptured, entwined in love.
Sighing in unison,
our cries ripple
and speak ing glorious awe.
There...I awaken
to the quiet of my room...
A contented, blissful soul.
Copyright ©
ShadowsCloud
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2003-02-21 12:30:00]
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Re: Deam Lover
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by Unaekseveer1 on
Saturday, 1st March 2003 @ 08:52:24 PM AEST
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This one's a very calming, peaceful piece Candice,
Another slightly different style here, I'm just beginning to realise that your style is all different styles in one! Didn't take me long did it!?!:-)
Oh and don't worry, enjoyable enough to not notice the spelling;-)
I like again!
With love
Dean:-) |
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Re: Deam Lover
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by ShadowsCloud on
Sunday, 2nd March 2003 @ 07:25:11 PM AEST
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Dean, i am glad you like it. And you are right my style is alot of different styles in one. I have found that it is much easier for me to write how I feel when I don't confine my self to just one style. You know I didn't even notive the mis-spelling until just now.
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