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Epitaph
Contributed by
zenith66
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Tuesday, 23rd January 2007 @ 09:18:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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( It lies in crystal blankets,
Across the autunm sky,
The scent of summer gone,
And careless days gone by.)
Only a memory, carved in stone,
Remind of a time when I wasn't alone,
An epitaph before its time...
We planned to live and love as we grew old,
Not to be separated by concrete grey and cold,
....Grey and cold as I have grown...
Copyright ©
zenith66
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2007-01-23 21:18:50]
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Re: Epitaph
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by FRANCO on
Tuesday, 23rd January 2007 @ 11:11:07 PM AEST
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IT IS A VERY TOUCHING POEM, FRIEND I UNDERSTAND AND RELATE MYSELF TO THE MOOD AND EXPRESSION; AS I SAIL ON THE SAME BOAT.
TAKE CARE MY FRIEND YOU ARE NOT ALONE.
FRANCO. |
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Re: Epitaph
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by Rakerman1999 on
Wednesday, 24th January 2007 @ 09:35:25 AM AEST
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What great sadness in this write...
I have felt this way too
Very well done
Larry |
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Re: Epitaph
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 28th May 2007 @ 01:11:41 PM AEST
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a beautiful masterpiece,
hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Epitaph
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 4th September 2008 @ 12:33:53 AM AEST
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oh WOW zenith!! I'm so glad I traveled back to find this. It is SUCH a gem!
You have done this more than once. That is, taking so few words, lines
etc. and turned them into something enormous. It is a true gift my friend.
The feelings that secrete through this could soften the hardest heart.
A melancholy that wraps itself around your reader until all they can
do is breathe it in and let it soak them with the unpleasantness of
empty. I know of this. It tears at a soul, poet. DAMN! This is fabulous!!
The last line was so well interwoven with the whole piece. Brilliant work!!
~ Breezy
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