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Noble Man
Contributed by
drowningheart
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Tuesday, 23rd January 2007 @ 04:37:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Upon this earth lives a noble man
unknown to me amongst this land.
He's sailed and sailed the seven seas
in search of me.
Fueled by the forceful sun,
his pursuit for the love of one.
What seemed an eternity, his quest
but with her love he will be blessed.
Our paths will cross, our eyes will meet
and with one look, hearts skip a beat
Standing before, I know its he
that noble man unknown to me
Copyright ©
drowningheart
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2007-01-23 16:37:20]
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Re: Noble Man
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by desire on
Tuesday, 23rd January 2007 @ 04:42:52 PM AEST
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| short and powerful.......loved it |
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Re: Noble Man
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by ButchCorpuz on
Tuesday, 23rd January 2007 @ 06:23:08 PM AEST
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I loved your poem. Short but gripping.
Keep writing!
Butch Corpuz |
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Re: Noble Man
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by MisfitMe on
Tuesday, 23rd January 2007 @ 07:28:17 PM AEST
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I love the romanticism...refreshingly sweet!!!
BigLoveMuchPeace
~MisfitMe |
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Re: Noble Man
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by Crow on
Tuesday, 23rd January 2007 @ 09:37:15 PM AEST
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bright, and hope-filled write, nice read!
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Re: Noble Man
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by Jen54 on
Wednesday, 24th January 2007 @ 11:52:45 PM AEST
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You have a great gift with words. This takes my breath away. Never stop writing we would lose a great writer.
-Jen |
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Re: Noble Man
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by needledancing on
Friday, 30th March 2007 @ 01:47:59 PM AEST
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| Great manifestation of thought...and he shall arrive. One only send the thought to create the reality. Wisely written and power to those words. |
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