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Sweets
Contributed by
niccipooh
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Tuesday, 23rd January 2007 @ 03:54:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
SecretLove
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I need you to stop doing this to me…invading my world the way you do…you’re such a sneaky thing…with your easy smile and your intruding eyes…I swear, you steal the life right out of me…I feel so breathless, so light, so vulnerable when you’re around…left to a state of heightened sensation…my limbs weaken slowly and surely …as I try to alleviate every desire, every temptation, every yearning held inside of me…as they rush to all sensory outlets that live within…overwhelming me with such a hunger that devours all existing energy…my present being is ignored, starved as I want to experience all of you…how much it hurts to be near you…how much it hurts to leave you…as I cant unsee you, unfeel you, unthink you…my imagination is in a buzz…my anatomy confused…you feel so good in my world…satisfying every perception of you I indulge…becoming faint at the heart…faint at the fingers...the thought of you isn’t good for me…nothing else matters when you’re in my world…I wish you’d free me…I wish you’d let me be….
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Re: Sweets
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by desire on
Tuesday, 23rd January 2007 @ 04:44:30 PM AEST
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| this is beautiufu, i was feeling it |
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Re: Sweets
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by ButchCorpuz on
Tuesday, 23rd January 2007 @ 06:18:38 PM AEST
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Wow! There's nothing more rattling than unexpressed love. I loved your poem. Nice flow.
Keep writing!
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Re: Sweets
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by Drapes on
Saturday, 27th January 2007 @ 02:11:35 PM AEST
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I feel the same about my ex's brother who I see from time to time and never talk to.. so I know what you're talking about..
I really like this line "as I cant unsee you, unfeel you, unthink you" Great job!
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