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The Walls
Contributed by
Briddy_G
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Tuesday, 23rd January 2007 @ 12:36:51 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I’m a scared little girl in a cold world
With no one to turn to but the walls.
No one understands me
But these silent halls.
No one gives me credit
For anything I do at all.
No one gives the slightest damn
When I begin to fall.
The light of truth shines brighter than the lie;
It scorches and burns until you die.
So I spread my wings in attempt to fly;
So many things stop those who try.
These walls are cold, grey and dull.
The secrets they hold they shall never tell.
They are old; they know me well.
My soul I sold; I’m going to hell.
But who really cares?
Hell’s just a place…
More important now are the tears on my face.
I’m alone and scared…
Can’t you see?
Maybe if someone cared I could be free.
But no one notices my fear, so this is my all.
No wonder, my dear, I pray to the walls…
Copyright ©
Briddy_G
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2007-01-23 00:36:51]
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Re: The Walls
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by venkat on
Tuesday, 23rd January 2007 @ 02:17:34 AM AEST
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"The light of truth shines brighter than the lie;
It scorches and burns until you die.
So I spread my wings ,,,"
Good lines..Keep writing on..God bless!
venkat
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Re: The Walls
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by UrMyInspiration on
Tuesday, 23rd January 2007 @ 08:37:12 AM AEST
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| Very sad... We have all been there... Keep writing! |
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Re: The Walls
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by Balmain_Tiger on
Tuesday, 23rd January 2007 @ 09:23:40 AM AEST
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| A place alone can be so sad unless we find a use for it in the way you had |
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Re: The Walls
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by PhantomVampyress on
Tuesday, 23rd January 2007 @ 09:51:20 AM AEST
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this is very powerful and so full of emotions for a first write.. awesome job in expression.. I enjoyed this piece of work alot.. keep writing
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Re: The Walls
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by DrowningHeart on
Tuesday, 23rd January 2007 @ 07:00:13 PM AEST
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Great poem, I can sympathize. If you ever need someone to talk to, hit me up.
Blessed be
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Re: The Walls
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by jaded41reason on
Wednesday, 24th January 2007 @ 01:58:15 AM AEST
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| I really like this one=) keep writting |
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