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I have no face of my own
Contributed by
seafire
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Monday, 22nd January 2007 @ 11:30:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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I have no face of my own,
I am called by my sisters names
no one knows me at all
I wish someone would see me
but in reality I have no identity
I am here but yet I am not
for I have no face of my own.
mare
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Re: I have no face of my own
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by UrMyInspiration on
Tuesday, 23rd January 2007 @ 09:00:15 AM AEST
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| This is a sad poem but very nicely written. God Bless! |
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Re: I have no face of my own
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by PhantomVampyress on
Tuesday, 23rd January 2007 @ 09:53:45 AM AEST
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I am impressed with your writing.. I am glad you are letting the creative mind open finally after years. this is short and very powerful.. very good job!! I know what your talking about here lolz
Vampyress JENNI |
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Re: I have no face of my own
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by strawberryshortcake on
Tuesday, 23rd January 2007 @ 01:27:07 PM AEST
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| good writing. i can relate to this sometimes i feel that way.like i'm living life but in someone else's shadow because no one sees me for who i really am. looking forward to reading more of your work. |
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Re: I have no face of my own
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 23rd January 2007 @ 02:56:43 PM AEST
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| Even though it would seem to be a common topic, there is something very original about this piece. I understand you are new to writing...or writing again. I like this and I look forward to watching you grow. |
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Re: I have no face of my own
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by dougnut on
Tuesday, 27th February 2007 @ 11:53:08 AM AEST
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Sad poem.
But Totaly Honest
I can empathis as I used to wear a mask so
nobody could see the real me.
I can see hidden talent here. Please keep
writing venting out feelings, good or bad
I enjoyed reading this , Thanks for sharing.
Doug :-)
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