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Woman
Contributed by
crow
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Monday, 22nd January 2007 @ 07:27:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Mix the heart and soul of any woman
with the bluest ocean
brilliant sun.
Borrow just enough perfect from Winter
Summer`s rainbows
Autumn`s sounds.
Stir-in white clouds
for her constant changing,
a color due
for the distance in her eyes..
A lonesome sound
that rivets your soul,
amazement in her touch.
Then add what stops you...
what makes you go on...
Heart and Soul of a Woman" Vincent
Copyright ©
crow
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2007-01-22 19:27:57]
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Re: Woman
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by shelby on
Monday, 22nd January 2007 @ 07:54:55 PM AEST
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I loved the air to this hun.
stir in white clouds for her constant changing oh yes you hit that on the mark, * evil grins*
~Michelle~ |
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Re: Woman
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 23rd January 2007 @ 06:52:16 AM AEST
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good grief! This was so completely romantic and gentle.
Breath-taking~
I was reading a bit of Donne last night, and boy .. you have
captured in your write, pieces of him from long ago. So
captivatingly soft, this was .. like a dream. And there is
enough beauty and regal grace in here to capture any
heart, (I dare say without the owner even knowing! )
*sigh*
Stunning. Truly ..
~Breezy |
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Re: Woman
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by PhantomVampyress on
Tuesday, 23rd January 2007 @ 10:11:50 AM AEST
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wow this is very beauitfully written.. very powerful.. I love the ending and wonderful flow.. awesome job
vampyress Jenni |
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Re: Woman
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Tuesday, 23rd January 2007 @ 04:22:13 PM AEST
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Vincent a breath taking and most beautiful write you have penned here. I thoroughly enjoyed it. A gem of a write thanks so much for posting it~
warm hugs,
dreamer |
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