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A POEM
Contributed by
Malcolmsdreamgirl
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Monday, 22nd January 2007 @ 10:13:57 AM in AEST
Topic:
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THE POETRY SITE
A POEM BY ICCLE MEE ;-)
I STARTED BROWSING THRU THE INTERNET - TO TRY AND FIND A SITE
TO PUT SOME WORDS ON PAPER - JUST SEE IF I COULD WRITE
I FOUND THE WORDS JUST SEEMED TO FLOW AND SO I TYPED THEM OUT
THEN POSTED THEM UPON THE SITE, WOULD THEY BE READ? I DOUBT!
SOON I FOUND MY MIND A WANDERING, WONDER IF MY POEMS READ?
ALL THOSE LINES I WROTE ABOUT MY MALC? SHOULD I WRITE OF LIFE INSTEAD?
OH HOW I SMILED WHEN AT LEAST I SAW, SOME PEOPLE THEY HAD VIEWED!
AND EVEN PLACED SOME COMMENTS AND NICE ONES, NONE WERE RUDE!
T'WASNT LONG BEFORE I SAT AND TYPED OUT MORE AND MORE
AND EXCITED LOOKED MOST ANXIOUSLY TO SEE WHAT WAS THE SCORE?
IF ONLY PEOPLE REALISED, HOW PLEASING IT IS, TO READ
A COMMENT, WRITTEN HERE AND THERE... IF WE'RE TO SUCCEED
I GET A FEELING OF EXCITEMENT AND EVEN A WARM GLOW
WHEN I READ MY POEMS WERE UNDERSTOOD BY PEOPLE I DONT KNOW
I LIKE TO SEE THE SCORE HIGH TOO IT GIVES ME QUITE A BUZZ
INFACT I LOVE ALL OF IT..... THE INTERACTION AND THE FUSS
I ALMOST GET FRUSTRATED WHEN IM TOLD I CAN'T SUBMIT
I STAMP MY FEET AND SCREAM A LOT ...THROW A CHILDLIKE FIT
BUT TODAY, IT WAS A DODDLE .AND IT SAID "YEAH GO AHEAD"
BUT I HAD NO POEM READY, SO I SUBMIT THIS INSTEAD!!!
SO READ AWAY AND COMMENT - BE GENTLE NOW AND NICE ...
EVEN IF U WERE JUST TO VIEW- IM SURE THAT WILL SUFFICE
BUT REMEMBER THAT WARM FEELING, THAT YOUR COMMENTS GIVE TO ME
I THANK YOU ALL FOR READING THIS MUCH LOVE, FROM ICCLE DEE XXX
Copyright ©
Malcolmsdreamgirl
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2007-01-22 10:13:57]
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Re: A POEM
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by girish on
Monday, 22nd January 2007 @ 10:58:42 AM AEST
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ideas flow when you select a subject. that`s what i did. now i published about 130 poems.
read some of mine you will get more ideas worth people giving more comments.
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Re: A POEM
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by shelby on
Monday, 22nd January 2007 @ 03:59:35 PM AEST
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I enjoyed this. It has an upbeat message along with flow to it.
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