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your losing me in the stars
Contributed by
Sparkz16
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Monday, 22nd January 2007 @ 06:53:09 AM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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Ever wish just one night could last forever and just sleep under a blanket of stars?
you forget about everything and everyone this is just you in cruise control like a drug you cant get enough of but you hate it so damn much. just you under the stars peaceful and free. losing grip floating further up towards the star lit sky. this is you and only you in your time make it last. forget everyone, everything forget yourself just live the moment and never forget it. keep a photograph of this in your heart.
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2007-01-22 06:53:09]
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Re: your losing me in the stars
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by yangdantien on
Monday, 22nd January 2007 @ 09:22:21 AM AEST
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I share this wish...good job. Keep your pen flowing.
Peace
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Re: your losing me in the stars
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by PhantomVampyress on
Monday, 22nd January 2007 @ 09:56:51 AM AEST
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this is a very pleasant write.. thanks for sharing.. i like the ending especially
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