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kiss of death
Contributed by
damned_saint
on
Monday, 22nd January 2007 @ 06:13:33 AM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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i started to walk away again
driven by sorrows and misery
the fruit of your lies and deception
poisoned my heart and made it black
and what lies beyond now
is a life of agony
tormented in your arms
fighting for our destiny...
feeling like a blind man
i can't touch and i can't see
the face behind the mask
the one that makes my heart beats fast
nowhere else to go, my heart's stuck
forever hollow, bleeding...
fooling myself over again
beliving the lie that i was loved by you
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2007-01-22 06:13:33]
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Re: kiss of death
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by Sparkz16 on
Monday, 22nd January 2007 @ 06:54:35 AM AEST
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| wow very nice i felt the emotion in it |
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Re: kiss of death
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by Malcolmsdreamgirl on
Monday, 22nd January 2007 @ 07:24:45 AM AEST
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Painful read...... Everytime I read a poem like this and feel the pain I want to hug the person that wrote it and tell them life goes on .... Karma will sort .... THIS was not the person for you why oh why do so many people waste their love and precious time on people that don't deserve ? Take pride in knowing as a person that deserves one day you will be far happier than you ever thought possible, with the person God intended for you .. just be patient ... your time will come
Good luck xxx |
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Re: kiss of death
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by Channing on
Monday, 22nd January 2007 @ 09:31:08 AM AEST
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| Sorry to hear about your loss, however life must go on and you'll find the strength to continue it. Great write, keep up the good work! |
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