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Almost Like You're There
Contributed by
PhantomsLDY
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Friday, 21st February 2003 @ 08:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
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It's another Valentine's day
And yet again you have to be away
I set the table for two
There is no one else here
Just me without you
I put your picture across from me
So that we can have dinner together
Even if it is just pretend
My heart is breaking into so many tiny pieces
The tears are streaming
I almost can't remember your kisses
I've put on your favorite red dress
The one I wore for our first kiss
The same one I wore when I said yes
I light another candle
Think to myself, sometimes this is more than I can handle
I sit here alone afraid to think of you
Knowing your heart is also breaking in two
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PhantomsLDY
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2003-02-21 08:00:00]
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Re: Almost Like You're There
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by LOWMAN613 on
Friday, 21st February 2003 @ 09:11:57 AM AEST
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| So hard it must be to be away from him,& I felt for myself that I didnt see my husband for a whole week at times I couldnt do it! I commend you! Hang in there! Christina |
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Re: Almost Like You're There
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by xxmonstahxx on
Friday, 21st February 2003 @ 11:02:40 AM AEST
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| well written... what a sad valentine's day.. sorry ;-( |
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Re: Almost Like You're There
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by xxmonstahxx on
Friday, 21st February 2003 @ 11:02:42 AM AEST
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| well written... what a sad valentine's day.. sorry ;-( |
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Re: Almost Like You're There
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by xxmonstahxx on
Friday, 21st February 2003 @ 11:02:50 AM AEST
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| well written... what a sad valentine's day.. sorry ;-( |
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Re: Almost Like You're There
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by wyrd_faerie on
Friday, 21st February 2003 @ 03:41:05 PM AEST
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| oh...this is so sad...keep smiling, it'll be ok... |
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Re: Almost Like You're There
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Friday, 21st February 2003 @ 05:32:14 PM AEST
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Awwww Ldy....I'm sure The Phantom felt the same... I hope and pray for his safe return to you SOON.....
Hugs,
Jenni |
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Re: Almost Like You're There
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by The-solo-subject on
Saturday, 22nd February 2003 @ 05:05:16 AM AEST
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This poem hit very close to home. I also was away from my loved one here in korea. Thank you It was very moving.
The-solo-subject |
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Re: Almost Like You're There
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 22nd February 2003 @ 05:45:56 PM AEST
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| awwww im so sorry, i wish i could buy him a ticket home to you, love and huggs to you and your family, always nessa |
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Re: Almost Like You're There
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by DreamWeaver on
Sunday, 23rd February 2003 @ 01:55:51 AM AEST
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| How heartbreaking, especially after I just read his poem today that he has received word to remain in Korea for another 90 days. My heart goes out to you for the pain you both feel in missing each other, but you are both so blessed if only you knew, that your love is so beautifully out there and inside you and obviously for eternity ... I envy you almost, even if that sounds crazy. You have a beautiful gift, and when you eventually reunite I'm sure if I look out my window the heavens will be exploding :))))) Stay strong and look forward to that day. ... Jan |
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Re: Almost Like You're There
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by karoody on
Sunday, 23rd February 2003 @ 02:31:09 AM AEST
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| wow, the strength in you two is amazing...don't know if i could find that strength...best of wishes to the both of you, and wishes for a quick return of your phantom. |
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Re: Almost Like You're There
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by LadyDama on
Tuesday, 11th March 2003 @ 04:52:51 AM AEST
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| beautifully sad... excellent poem... |
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Re: Almost Like You're There
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by Kane on
Thursday, 27th March 2003 @ 12:29:18 AM AEST
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Very well put, another powerful write.
Kane |
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