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Forget
Contributed by
bws71
on
Monday, 22nd January 2007 @ 01:45:47 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Forget
The rushing of our lives
like water, like static, like broken film
the opening and closing of doors
as we strain to smile
The blur of cross-town traffic and missing meals
The lonely tick at night
The quiet lonely of the dark.
Separation
In the mirror stands a self that is not you
A face that turns, a mouth that works dryly at words
The empty hulled heart, clanging, clinging
Shelled out with an ice cream scoop
An empty shirt sleeve pinned up and out of the way.
Empty.
The indent of your body, absent now
Unslept sheets, unpressed pillow
And time.
The quiet lonely of the dark.
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how do I make this left aligned?
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bws71
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2007-01-22 01:45:47]
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Re: Forget
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by PhantomVampyress on
Monday, 22nd January 2007 @ 10:01:14 AM AEST
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I like how each stanza begins.. and how you took a creative approach to this and the ending is a good question.. awesome job
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Re: Forget
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by Bleedthelove on
Tuesday, 23rd January 2007 @ 01:24:31 PM AEST
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| I like this piece alot. Very nicely done. |
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Re: Forget
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by XxXLost_SoleXxX on
Saturday, 24th October 2009 @ 07:50:32 PM AEST
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| nicely done i like it alot =] |
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