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TEARS FROM HEAVEN(child abduction)
Contributed by
loveisendless
on
Monday, 22nd January 2007 @ 12:08:50 AM in AEST
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You Said I Couldn't Sing Soprano,
Or Might Go Very Far,
& It Would've Been Nice To Of At Least Learned To Play Our Piano,
Well At Least,I've Learned How To Play A Harp,
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You Didn't Have Any Time For Me,
& Always Let Me Walk Home In The Rain,
I Could Of Told You One Of My Many Dreams,
But All I've Got Now Is Only A Single & Lonely Kind Of Pain,
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I Never Seemed To Be Good Enough,
& The Fun Had To Stop Before It Could Ever Begin,
Despite Altogether I Thought This Was Love,
& You Were My One & Only Friend,
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Visions Of Your Voice Still Come My Way,
As I'm Stuck Up Here With Only A View,
& If I Had A Choice Of What To Say,
It Would Be,Mommy Watch Out As My...TEARS FROM HEAVEN...Might Rain Down On You,
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I'll Always Forgive You In My Heart,
Even Though There Wasn't Much Love For Me,
I Guess I'll Live Forever Among The Sky Lit Stars,
Watching Over Your Every Feeling Far Above From Your Reach,
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All I Wanted Was For You To Come & Get Me Mommy-Why Didn't You Just Listen,
Then He Wouldn't Have Been Able To Of Taken Me As I Was So Far Away From Home,
At Least Like In My Dreams That Beautiful Rose That Now Grows On My Grave With A Rainbow Glisten,
As Its Thorns Will Always Catch My...TEARS FROM HEAVEN...That Fall On Me,& Me Alone !
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Re: TEARS FROM HEAVEN(child abduction)
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by Crow on
Monday, 22nd January 2007 @ 08:54:12 AM AEST
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O`man...why you want to make me cry this early in the morning. this goes right to the heart, and there is a sting" for the reader..
good write. Crow |
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Re: TEARS FROM HEAVEN(child abduction)
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by PhantomVampyress on
Monday, 22nd January 2007 @ 11:19:11 AM AEST
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this is a very sad and powerful write.. its beautifully written.. it made me cry.. i can feel this piece.. this is a superb write so full of pain and sadness it hits you right in the heart and makes you cry.. beauitful job
vampyress Jenni |
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Re: TEARS FROM HEAVEN(child abduction)
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by strawberryshortcake on
Wednesday, 24th January 2007 @ 12:15:00 PM AEST
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| my heart is broken. the tears won't stop falling. what you have written is truly beautiful. if more people would open their eyes and hearts like you maybe one of us could make a difference in this category. i just relived my own childhood pain after reading this. i was not abducted but i suffered at the hands of an abusive father for 13 years. this write deserves attention . BRAVO!!BRAVO!!! |
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Re: TEARS FROM HEAVEN(child abduction)
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by emystar on
Sunday, 25th February 2007 @ 02:15:19 AM AEST
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This is definently heart wrenching.
Well done, my friend.
big huggs,
emy |
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