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The Sound Of Silence
Contributed by
zenith66
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Sunday, 21st January 2007 @ 10:54:59 PM in AEST
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Piercing, penetrating my straining ears
Waiting, lying bundled, my family in tears
No sign of life, no loving smile or pulse or breath
He has fallen to his death
It hurts me now, almost unreal, I swallow hard
An unearthly feeling of end
Mother sobs mutely into his lifeless chest
Limbs ruined and sprawled
It forces its way from ear to ear
Daddys gone...and the sound of silence is all that i can hear.
Zenith66
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zenith66
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2007-01-21 22:54:59]
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Re: The Sound Of Silence
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by loveisendless on
Monday, 22nd January 2007 @ 12:20:09 AM AEST
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SORRY IF THIS IS TRUE,BUT IT HAS A CERTAIN KIND OF HEART FEELING TO IT-MEANING I LIKED IT!
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Re: The Sound Of Silence
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by Dom on
Monday, 22nd January 2007 @ 08:09:36 AM AEST
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I haven't read the first entry so I can't say if this is any better, but I will say that I thought this was beautiful and it brought tears to my eyes.
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Re: The Sound Of Silence
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by PhantomVampyress on
Monday, 22nd January 2007 @ 09:47:58 AM AEST
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wow very powerful write.. I love the imagery on this one.. its like one of those things that are realistic.. awesome job.. thanks for sharing.. very well done
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Re: The Sound Of Silence
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by Rakerman1999 on
Monday, 22nd January 2007 @ 04:38:54 PM AEST
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Powerfully emotional....good imagery and rhyme scheme.
Very well done
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