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Pain & Sarrow

Contributed by Snowkiller69 on Sunday, 21st January 2007 @ 09:18:04 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



The pain the drama.
The anger that leads to uncontrollable violence.
The thoughts that lead deeper and burn harder and harder leading to insanity.
The Depression getting stronger and stronger.
The Thing you want the most is there but afar at a distance that which is unknown.
The Love is there but corrupted or lost.
The Anger Again that leads to uncontrollable violence.
The Hatred turned into frustration that leads to stupidity.
The Rage That Burns under my skin greater than 1000 degrees.
The Burning Itching Sensation that you wish to go away, but never does.
The Crying Suffering you feel after you have done something wrong or dident do something right.
The past that you run from, yet havent had time to catch a breath and take it all in, but its to much, so you start slipping, falling, fading into something you never dreamed.

Everything you see is there, but is it, Things start crumbling and fading vision gets blury,
you start panicking your vision starts spinning so fast you start to grab on to everything and anything as
you see or thinking that you are slipping, falling, fading in desperation you reach out to find something or
someone to help you but is it to late?

Your waking up from your Coma your eyes are open you look to see who is around you, And see
The one you loved and cared for all along is still there waiting for you.

But in reality its all just a dream, and how i feel.




Copyright © Snowkiller69 ... [ 2007-01-21 21:18:04]
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Re: Pain & Sarrow (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Sunday, 21st January 2007 @ 09:28:09 PM AEST
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wow very well expressed.. you can feel the lifes questions and the emotion in this penned write.. very right on!! awesome job

vampyress jenni


Re: Pain & Sarrow (User Rating: 1 )
by brew on Monday, 22nd January 2007 @ 09:12:01 AM AEST
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That is what happenes, too so many. Not a good thing to have or have done....Beautifully expressed feeling, in the write penned. Sometimes letting it out makes you know and learn. Thanks for sharing


Brew~


Re: Pain & Sarrow (User Rating: 1 )
by UrMyInspiration on Monday, 22nd January 2007 @ 09:09:34 PM AEST
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The Thing you want the most is there but afar at a distance that which is unknown... Great line.

This is a very powerful poem.


Re: Pain & Sarrow (User Rating: 1 )
by one11 on Friday, 23rd February 2007 @ 11:38:07 AM AEST
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i know how you feel now. very thought provoking.




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