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In A Dark Room
Contributed by
EddieDean
on
Sunday, 21st January 2007 @ 06:10:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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In a dark Room,
I sit in Silence.
I keep it Quiet,
Because it will be my Tomb.
I look at the Walls,
With all the Pictures,
And all my Drawings.
I look at my Arms,
At all the Scars,
And all the Wounds.
Everyone Hates Me,
They all Shun Me,
No on Loves Me.
I'll show them All,
I look up and look at the clock on the Wall.
My time has Come,
I put the gun to my Head,
And close my Eyes.
The loud Gunshot,
Is all thats Heard,
In A Dark Room.
Copyright ©
EddieDean
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2007-01-21 18:10:01]
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Re: In A Dark Room
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by shelby on
Sunday, 21st January 2007 @ 08:13:51 PM AEST
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Now this is dark and very sad. I felt a chill go through me when I read the very last stanza.
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Re: In A Dark Room
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by unknown_utopia on
Sunday, 21st January 2007 @ 09:06:14 PM AEST
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Deep saddness in this flow
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Re: In A Dark Room
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by brew on
Monday, 22nd January 2007 @ 09:33:31 AM AEST
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Lots of deep, and sad feeling flow within....Sorry for the feeling.....it hurts,sometimes, as we all know. Yet, we smile,grit our teeth and go on.
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