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Seasonal Grey
Contributed by
CuriousitysCat
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Sunday, 21st January 2007 @ 04:59:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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It coils
And constricts rapidly
Stunning
Those eyes that open
Themselves for the flights
Being trippy
Watch it billow
And gush
Out into space that
Surrounds
It fills my vision
Stings my eyes
After a bit
But I must
Watch
As the circles
Open up
Only to close
And then explode into
Space
It moves me
To out of place
Where things don't
Sink in 'till
The next morning
Yet strangely
It tends to fill
I've not refound
My space
But this every-changing
Cloud is a
Fine substitute
While waiting
We joke
And continue dancing
With the smoke...
~ThEnD
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CuriousitysCat
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2007-01-21 16:59:04]
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Re: Seasonal Grey
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by MisfitMe on
Sunday, 21st January 2007 @ 06:13:29 PM AEST
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Lumpy & I have renamed this piece...
"DANCE OF THE NAG CHAMPA"
forgive our presumption here, but, ya' gotta' admit...it's good, as is this write.
BigLove, Babez
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Re: Seasonal Grey
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by yangdantien on
Sunday, 21st January 2007 @ 09:45:43 PM AEST
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Many a dream and prophecy came from watching the curls, circles and spirals in drift defining lines we know are there but rarely see. It has a lasting value and comes alive in your words. Love to see if several seasons from now you haven't devoted other pieces to such experiences.
Well Done
Peace
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