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Untitled
Contributed by
xxmonstahxx
on
Friday, 21st February 2003 @ 06:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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She walked alone
in the dark alley
of her despair
She crumbled to the floor
tears of blood
dripping from her eyes
Her shadow crept over her
arms stretching down
choking her with self-hatred
Copyright ©
xxmonstahxx
... [
2003-02-21 06:00:00]
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Re: Untitled
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by tawakwan on
Friday, 7th March 2003 @ 02:50:22 PM AEST
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| sorry,but this is not poetry,but then a lame attempt |
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Re: Untitled
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 8th March 2003 @ 11:33:41 PM AEST
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| hrmm.. thanks for the input.. |
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Re: Untitled
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by Archie on
Monday, 3rd May 2004 @ 03:07:28 PM AEST
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| I hope you are working through things. You write how you feel, poetry is self expression if this is your way of dealing with life that is ok with me. Keep working at ai and something positive and beautiful will come. I promise! |
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