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I Wait
Contributed by
EddieDean
on
Saturday, 20th January 2007 @ 10:31:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Standing my Ground,
I take a hard Look,
All Around.
Here I Stand,
Here I Wait.
With empty Hands,
I leave my life to Fate.
Sun,
Rain,
Snow,
Wind.
I stand my Ground,
And I Wait.
Waitng,
Watching,
Hoping.
Here I Wait,
For my Life to Begin,
Here I Wait,
To pay for my Sins.
Here I Wait,
In the Cold.
Standing my Ground,
Waiting for You.
Copyright ©
EddieDean
... [
2007-01-20 22:31:32]
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Re: I Wait
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by shelby on
Saturday, 20th January 2007 @ 10:49:54 PM AEST
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Powerful words and love the style it added to what you were writing about. Make your stand, just dont wait in the cold to long.
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Re: I Wait
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by NoSaint on
Sunday, 21st January 2007 @ 11:07:17 AM AEST
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well written
Shari |
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Re: I Wait
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by MisfitMe on
Wednesday, 14th February 2007 @ 07:40:35 PM AEST
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Very powerful in its stark expression, I enjoyed this in what I can only call a 'different' way...as I have yet to define what that difference might be, for myself...
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