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Your Kiss
Contributed by
ButchCorpuz
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Saturday, 20th January 2007 @ 10:20:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Of all the things in life I know
There’s one that’s on top of my list
Something I’ll never, ever let go
One I’ll never, ever resist
I’m lost inside a passionate bliss
The bliss by the sweetness of your kiss
Of all the blessings I have each day
One thing I’m very grateful for
Something that sweeps my troubles away
One that I’ll keep asking for more
The one moment that I truly miss
Time standing still while I feel your kiss
And of all the things in life I crave
Beyond the shadow of a doubt
One that I’d have forever to save
One I won’t last a day without
No feeling could be sweeter than this
The taste of falling into your kiss
~ Butch Corpuz ~
~ 16 January 2007 ~
~ AU – 2:01 AM ~
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Re: Your Kiss
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by shelby on
Saturday, 20th January 2007 @ 10:53:35 PM AEST
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The taste of falling into your kiss,
damn!!!!!! This is full of spice and the flow just carried it along. I do appreciate your writing. Get off here and get your kiss!!
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Re: Your Kiss
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by myheartsvoice on
Sunday, 21st January 2007 @ 12:33:21 AM AEST
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Beautiful work Butch as always ain't love grand were two lucky guys.
thanks also for the comment.
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Re: Your Kiss
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by Vampirequeen on
Sunday, 21st January 2007 @ 01:10:47 AM AEST
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Spicey is right
the taste of falling into your kiss.
very impressive |
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Re: Your Kiss
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by Bleedthelove on
Wednesday, 24th January 2007 @ 04:49:32 PM AEST
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| Aww. Beautiful poem. Good job. |
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