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UNCARING
Contributed by
seafire
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Saturday, 20th January 2007 @ 09:33:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
hbadday
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I'M EVIL, Uncaring liar,
I have no heart,
I pretend so others will like me,
Don't get close close to me
for i am evil i will devour your very soul.
don't trust me for i will let you down.
I'm a liar, theres no room for me
I'll just hurt you with my viciousness
I'm heartless, i will laugh in your face because i have no heart.
I'm evil as you see I have no worries
because I dont care,
But reality is
I have a heart and I do Care
Emma
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seafire
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2007-01-20 21:33:38]
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Re: UNCARING
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by PhantomVampyress on
Sunday, 21st January 2007 @ 05:13:46 PM AEST
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this isn't bad its very powerful in emotion.. but as I said to you before when you had written this you needed to put more depth into it and change some of the wording but the feeling instilled in this piece is very well expressed
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Re: UNCARING
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by UrMyInspiration on
Tuesday, 23rd January 2007 @ 08:58:10 AM AEST
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Your sadness pours out into every line.
I hope things get better. Thank you for sharing this poem. |
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Re: UNCARING
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by Bleedthelove on
Tuesday, 23rd January 2007 @ 01:37:44 PM AEST
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| This poem reminds me of someone i know. Nicely written. |
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