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You Turn My Senses
Contributed by
JoeyTrib1550
on
Saturday, 20th January 2007 @ 10:53:32 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Advancing to kiss...
Feeling the sound of your heart touching my soul with caressing whispers
Hearing your unbearable beauty resounding in my head
Tasting the sweat of desire condensing on my mind
Smelling the weightlessness of your hair draining all of my thoughts
Seeing those sweet sugar coated lips glistening with liquid longing
As I advance
to kiss...
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2007-01-20 10:53:32]
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Re: You Turn My Senses
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by FRANCO on
Saturday, 20th January 2007 @ 12:00:11 PM AEST
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wha...really very romantic.
GOOD.
FRANCO |
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Re: You Turn My Senses
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by deadheadpoet on
Saturday, 20th January 2007 @ 12:20:40 PM AEST
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Saw the title and it automatically made me think of the song by John Denver (yeah, Im 42 and grew up listening to some John Denver) LOL His song was titled "Annie's Song" and I must share a couple of lines
"you fill up my senses like an night in a forest ..like a mountain in springtime...like a walk in the rain"
anywho beautiful lyrics and your write was beautiful as well. Very tender and intimate touching upon each of your "senses". Thanks for reminding me of the old song and for sharing this terrific love poem.
Peace, Laura |
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Re: You Turn My Senses
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by faith_my_eyes on
Saturday, 20th January 2007 @ 01:27:02 PM AEST
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| wow, breathtaking, as surely the moment was also. |
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Re: You Turn My Senses
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by amateurwriter on
Saturday, 20th January 2007 @ 11:06:26 PM AEST
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My god!! I must confess I blushed, for this lines reminded me of some intense moments!!
It is really beautiful. Great read! |
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Re: You Turn My Senses
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by Bleedthelove on
Monday, 29th January 2007 @ 01:09:51 PM AEST
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| Aww. Beautiful. Really good job. |
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