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She Speaks...
Contributed by
MisfitMe
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Saturday, 20th January 2007 @ 05:21:38 AM in AEST
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She speaks...
" Doubt not, I mean to have my way in this~
& you presume much in causing my delay
Think you to have left me so daft by a kiss~
that I'd be by your command made to stay...
For you, I've neither time nor inclination~
to explain what I alone need understand
And, will suffer no futher instigation~
before hard felt is the back of my hand..."
He speaks...
" I doubt not that you mean to have your way~
or that, I've dared much made bold by your kiss
Still in this, I mean to have my own say~
whether or not leaves grant by your highness...
While, I'd rather my arms your destination~
never twice need you ask to be unhand
For though, I've suffered your intimidation~
think not, I'll ever be by unmanned..."
to be continued...
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Re: She Speaks...
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by deadheadpoet on
Saturday, 20th January 2007 @ 09:47:51 AM AEST
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and she speaks with some sassy undertones..I like that. Got a love a sis with sass.
Peace and hugs,
Laura |
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Re: She Speaks...
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by yangdantien on
Saturday, 20th January 2007 @ 11:19:14 AM AEST
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I like the dialogue you established and relates as an inner argument between ones anima and animus trying to find the ground of belonging.
I like feeling the battle of wills here:
"...He speaks...
" I doubt not that you mean to have your way~
or that, I've dared much made bold by your kiss
Still in this, I mean to have my own say~
whether or not leaves grant by your highness..."
Making sarcasm at that which he cannot take away from you...Princess Queen Or Empress your rule is by divine right..
So says the knights of your royal court.
Bravo
Peace
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Re: She Speaks...
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Sunday, 21st January 2007 @ 04:25:18 PM AEST
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Sweet MissyMe you continue to grace our hearts with your amazing work. A journey into your poetic world and what an adventure it is.
I totally agree with Laura. You can't help, but love a lady with sass~ I patiently await the continuation my dear friend. Keep penning sweet Moon Maiden.
love ya,
sue m |
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Re: She Speaks...
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by CuriousitysCat on
Sunday, 21st January 2007 @ 05:45:04 PM AEST
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Righteous poem, I would have to say that this is probably my second favorite escaping memories installment. I hope that this line of stories continues on much like the never-ending story.
;]
THERE'S SOMETHING HERE FOR EVERYONE IN THESE POEMS; SO EVERYONE READ!!!
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Re: She Speaks...
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by Balmain_Tiger on
Tuesday, 23rd January 2007 @ 09:17:52 AM AEST
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| Speak and many may listen. Fight and they only stare to watch |
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Re: She Speaks...
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by emystar on
Thursday, 15th February 2007 @ 11:59:03 PM AEST
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Awesome work here.
Luv the way you presented this.
big huggs,
emy |
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Re: She Speaks...
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by hauntedscorp on
Thursday, 15th March 2007 @ 05:45:30 PM AEST
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I love a creative style such as this; it really adds depth and impact to each and every thought and emotion. There's a tongue-in-cheek attitude here that cannot be escaped either, and that's always something I admire in writing. There was one part in here that I must admit, screamed out at me. It reminded me very much of a situation I have been dealing with in recent months:
For you, I've neither time nor inclination~
to explain what I alone need understand
And, will suffer no futher instigation~
before hard felt is the back of my hand..."
Well done!
~Scorp.
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