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Kiss Me
Contributed by
Karlee14
on
Saturday, 20th January 2007 @ 04:59:58 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Kiss me
I'm contagious
Kill me
I'm ferocious
Save me
I'm potentious
Kiss me
Kill me
I can't see me
Save me
Want me
I can't hear me
Need me
Hit me
I can't feel me
Love me
Hate me
I can't fear me
Want me
I'm dying
Need me
I'm trying
Hit me
I'm lying
Kiss me
Kill me
I can't see me
Save me
Want me
I can't hear me
Need me
Hit me
I can't feel me
Love me
Hate me
I can't fear me
Love me
I'm relentless
Hate me
I'm regret less
Kiss me
I'm contagious
Kiss me
Kill me
I can't see me
Save me
Want me
I can't hear me
Need me
Hit me
I can't feel me
Love me
Hate me
I can't fear me
Kiss me
Kiss me
Kiss me
I'm contagious
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Karlee14
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2007-01-20 04:59:58] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Kiss Me
(User Rating: 1 ) by SocialSuicide on
Saturday, 20th January 2007 @ 06:25:26 AM AEST (User
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I like this one, it's almost emo but then it's completely different because of the repetative sections which just scream pop-ness. A good read nd sounds like there was some emotion behind it rather than an empty write. |
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