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Before I Had You On My Mind
Contributed by
myheartsvoice
on
Friday, 19th January 2007 @ 06:39:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Your kiss is like an angels voice
whispering in the night,as warm
as summer sunshine yet as soft
as candle light.
Your smile is sweet and gentle my
heart you put at ease, you touch
me and i shimmer like wind chimes
in the breeze.
To know you is to love you to love
you is no task, and if my life you
wanted all you'd have to do is ask.
How does one imagine finding love
and beauty to, davinci's mona lisa
couldn't touch the likes of you.
Yes we were truly meant for us
i felt it from the start, before i
had you on my mind i loved you in
my heart.
myheartsvoice
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2007-01-19 18:39:56] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Before I Had You On My Mind
(User Rating: 1 ) by ButchCorpuz on
Saturday, 20th January 2007 @ 10:29:12 PM AEST (User
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Good poem. Such is the work of a person in love.
Keep writing.
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Re: Before I Had You On My Mind
(User Rating: 1 ) by Eternal_Dreamer on
Tuesday, 23rd January 2007 @ 10:30:35 PM AEST (User
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Your work is a delight to read. I'm stunned to see that you only had one comment on your write. Please excuse our fellow poets for there lack of commenting. You're a top poet and I hope you know that. Keep up the great work.
warm hugs,
sue m
PS(have I ever told you that your wonderful work reminds me of a fellow poet and dear friend of mine. He was an awesome poet and I miss him & his work so much. Sadly he left YPDC) |
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