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Dream
Contributed by
xxmonstahxx
on
Friday, 21st February 2003 @ 03:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I dream of you
when I close my eyes
my true feelings
I can no longer hide
my love for you
Is still as strong
as that day we met
six years ago
We've both moved on
but now I know
No one can ever
compare to you
Copyright ©
xxmonstahxx
... [
2003-02-21 03:00:00]
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Re: Dream
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 21st February 2003 @ 12:09:59 PM AEST
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I don't think that this needs much work to be honest, it's short and sweet - the rhythm is great and it flows really well.
That's just my humble opinion....
Max |
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Re: Dream
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by xxmonstahxx on
Friday, 21st February 2003 @ 12:22:25 PM AEST
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| thanks... the more i read it the more i like it so maybe it is just fine the way it is.. i am always so paranoid about my poems |
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Re: Dream
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by DreamWeaver on
Sunday, 23rd February 2003 @ 01:58:58 AM AEST
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| I like this poem too ... I wouldn't change it either. Well written. |
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