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DEad BuTTErFliES
Contributed by
damned_saint
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Friday, 19th January 2007 @ 05:49:22 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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pale blue winter snow
peaks the moon
empty hollows
gliding through
waves chasing down the shore
my heart sunk deep
cold and sore
memories alone make one stumble
past is stranger than it seems
signs of life...
dawns the night
clinging on...
pushing through...
with nothing in their minds
building a home...
made of hopes and dreams
thinking you'll be strong
with promises alone
travelling afar, facing what?
alive but not moving
dreaming without waking...
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2007-01-19 05:49:22]
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Re: DEad BuTTErFliES
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by Nothingness on
Friday, 19th January 2007 @ 08:53:05 AM AEST
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Good write the emotion is very well expressed and by reading it i feel i can share in your heart very well done
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Re: DEad BuTTErFliES
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by shelby on
Friday, 19th January 2007 @ 09:51:40 AM AEST
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Deeply emotive write,
I loved alive but not moving
dreaming without waking....
Beautiful in its sadness, good images, it flows along like a stream, nicely done
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Re: DEad BuTTErFliES
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by deadheadpoet on
Friday, 19th January 2007 @ 11:33:38 AM AEST
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The title totally captured me. Your write is well penned. I love the first stanza, it just set the scene really well. Good stuff.
Peace, Laura |
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Re: DEad BuTTErFliES
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Friday, 19th January 2007 @ 12:34:55 PM AEST
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The emotions were great... I liked this poem.. Well expressed...
Take care
Christina |
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Re: DEad BuTTErFliES
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by Whisper on
Saturday, 20th January 2007 @ 11:39:24 AM AEST
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I found this haunting, Lost and wandering . Much like the last days of a Butterflies Life. Knowing from the beginning that its the final end which is a true beginning.
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Re: DEad BuTTErFliES
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by Whisper on
Saturday, 20th January 2007 @ 11:40:07 AM AEST
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I found this haunting, Lost and wandering . Much like the last days of a Butterflies Life. Knowing from the beginning that its the final end which is a true beginning and you did in between..
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