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Life...Peaks, Valleys and Plateaus
Contributed by
Alotta_Smiles
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Thursday, 18th January 2007 @ 01:02:57 PM in AEST
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You go about life
Same old everyday.
Then all of a sudden
Your life’s gone astray.
How did this happen,
This is just my luck.
Why me, not again,
Man does life suck.
You whine and you moan
Complaining about.
You’re tired of crap
And want to freak out.
Then all of sudden
Within a short while,
Things look hopeful again
You’re able to smile.
You look back on the times
That life seemed so bleak,
And your grateful you made it
You’re now in a peak.
As life goes by
And things get mundane,
We get in our ruts
Things always the same.
Go to work, come home
Get up each day at 6:00.
Your life is so boring
You need a new fix.
Then before you know
You’re back in a panic.
What do you do?
You start to get manic.
But you stop and you think
Look at all you’ve been though,
Heartbreak, disappointment
Sometimes poverty too.
And just when you think
The valleys too deep,
You’re climbing again
No mountain too steep.
So I guess what I’m saying
What I want you to know,
Is that above every valley
Is a peak or plateau.
C. Hickmott
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Re: Life...Peaks, Valleys and Plateaus
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by PhantomVampyress on
Thursday, 18th January 2007 @ 01:29:59 PM AEST
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very well written.. this sums up alot of emotions you feel during periods of your life yet brings a sense of hope.. welcome to the site enjoy your stay..
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Re: Life...Peaks, Valleys and Plateaus
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by Rakerman1999 on
Thursday, 18th January 2007 @ 02:10:01 PM AEST
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This was technically excellent. A very important and uplifting message also that you were able to convey in a fun to read manner.
Very well done and welcome
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Re: Life...Peaks, Valleys and Plateaus
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by shelby on
Thursday, 18th January 2007 @ 03:54:35 PM AEST
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Nice flow to this write and an uplifting message. Thanks for sharing the wisdom and you are so right we do reach a plateau once the valleys have been taken on.
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Thursday, 18th January 2007 @ 05:08:28 PM AEST
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A big warm welcome to YPDC. I hope you enjoy it here.
Wow such words of wisdom. You have done an excellent job with this write. An uplifting and very well penned piece of poetry. Thanks so much for sharing it with us~
warm hugs,
sue m |
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Re: Life...Peaks, Valleys and Plateaus
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by Bleedthelove on
Wednesday, 24th January 2007 @ 05:08:49 PM AEST
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| Nicely worded. Good job. |
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