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Where is She?
Contributed by
Keatsdogg
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Friday, 21st February 2003 @ 01:40:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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She is my light that I cannot see.
So dark, and laden with secrecy.
I cannot bear to imagine her loneliness. I seek something within, her voice dripping poetry potently, lips forming breath expressing sentiments of God. I cry on her shoulder, she comforts me accurately. I embrace her hair, tangled warmth of sophistry.
Why must I wander? A dream-like daze searching in my heartfelt odyssey, a journey through immature girls who do not know how to spell the word "woman," without shedding a tear.
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Keatsdogg
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2003-02-21 01:40:00]
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Re: Where is She?
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by LadyDama on
Friday, 21st February 2003 @ 01:42:02 AM AEST
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| ah, we are out here... or, so my husband tells me ::smile::... blessings... and i hope you find her... |
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Re: Where is She?
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Friday, 21st February 2003 @ 06:14:38 AM AEST
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She is somewhere out there, Keats... good luck in your search....
Jenni |
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Re: Where is She?
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by mckayla on
Friday, 21st February 2003 @ 10:54:54 AM AEST
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Beuatiful write. I hope you find her soon!!
mckayla |
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Re: Where is She?
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by DreamWeaver on
Sunday, 23rd February 2003 @ 02:08:29 AM AEST
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| If you write about her in that way .. she will fall into your arms very soon .. all women love a romantic thoughtful man who can write poetry like this. My hopes are with you ... Jan |
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