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Garden of Dreams
Contributed by
Clarity_Rising
on
Thursday, 18th January 2007 @ 11:24:52 AM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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Beauty bestows in a garden of dreams,
Through whist light captures radiance
Through flowers and sunbeams.
Through nature, my solace can be found,
Beneath a canopy of clovers,
With lilies and lilacs often abound.
And in the days of the fading bluebell,
With waning light, and bitter air,
Only here, does my happiness dwell.
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Clarity_Rising
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2007-01-18 11:24:52]
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Re: Garden of Dreams
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by trueecho on
Thursday, 18th January 2007 @ 11:49:41 AM AEST
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took a few reads, but i like this..just as beautiful as the author,,thank you
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Re: Garden of Dreams
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by PhantomVampyress on
Thursday, 18th January 2007 @ 12:18:04 PM AEST
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a very peaceful calming write.. makes you feel like you are there.. awesome job
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Re: Garden of Dreams
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by cnstallion on
Thursday, 18th January 2007 @ 01:45:04 PM AEST
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| Very nice... you captured a moment and brought it to us all, and if that moment was one of fantasy, it didn't feel that way to me... beautiful read.. |
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Re: Garden of Dreams
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by Rakerman1999 on
Thursday, 18th January 2007 @ 02:40:29 PM AEST
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Bravo! Delicate and peacful...what excellent imagery. You, my friend, are a word artist .
Very well done
Roses at your feet
Larry |
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Re: Garden of Dreams
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by yangdantien on
Thursday, 18th January 2007 @ 03:45:22 PM AEST
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Excellent and concise...may we all live in the G.O.D
Well Done
Peace
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Re: Garden of Dreams
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Thursday, 18th January 2007 @ 05:04:28 PM AEST
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Wow you certainly know how to captivate your reader and leave them in awe. The imagery you cast in the readers mind is simply breath taking. Well done and keep up the brilliant work~
love n hugs,
sue m |
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Re: Garden of Dreams
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by moses on
Thursday, 18th January 2007 @ 08:24:41 PM AEST
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Wow, left me without words. I love poetry like this, well done. Written perfectly, your talent shines here. Extremely descriptive and simplistic.
Keep writing,
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