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You Are My Commitment
Contributed by
myheartsvoice
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Thursday, 18th January 2007 @ 10:49:24 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Listen to mind for it's you i'm
thinking of,look inside my heart
and you wll see it's you i love.
Listen to my words and you will
hear how much i care,see inside
my soul and know forever you'll
be there.
look into my eyes and know that
they will never roam, place your
self within my arms feel free to
call it home.
For you are my commitment in
my life you'll always be, that
solemn promise that i made the
day you married me.
myheartsvoice
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myheartsvoice
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2007-01-18 10:49:24]
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Re: You Are My Commitment
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by PhantomVampyress on
Thursday, 18th January 2007 @ 11:22:06 AM AEST
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wow another beautiful love write.. with such honor and devotion.. all I can say is beauitful
Vampyress Jenni |
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Re: You Are My Commitment
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by cnstallion on
Thursday, 18th January 2007 @ 02:05:10 PM AEST
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| very nice.... but it sounded like a bit newleywed to me.... dont get me wrong..some marriages last passionate forever..............................and some people win the lottery too...... either way... very nicely written... |
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Re: You Are My Commitment
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by shelby on
Thursday, 18th January 2007 @ 05:59:32 PM AEST
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lovely
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Re: You Are My Commitment
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Thursday, 18th January 2007 @ 07:25:06 PM AEST
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A beautiful, passionate and uplifting write. Wishing you a lifetime of love, happiness and togetherness. Well done & thanks so much for posting it~
warm hugs,
sue m |
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Re: You Are My Commitment
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by yangdantien on
Thursday, 18th January 2007 @ 10:09:19 PM AEST
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I love the intent of this poem. A shinning gem to crystallize the Vow which truly has such magic behind it and how many find ways to diminish the magic and let it become corrupt as this work avows the heart of commitment which starts from one.
Bravo, Brava, Bravi
Peace
Yangdantien |
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Re: You Are My Commitment
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by Bleedthelove on
Wednesday, 24th January 2007 @ 05:04:57 PM AEST
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| Very pleasant write. Nice job. |
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