|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
Side Street
Contributed by
drapes
on
Thursday, 18th January 2007 @ 07:43:03 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
|
This street our runway,
Secret love.
(Not so secret after all.)
Cracks and gouges,
We've slipped in.
Walked the way
So many times.
(A different world it used to be.)
No destination,
Hand in hand,
Peak of the afternoon.
Place to begin,
Place to end.
The sun's now set
And fails to rise.
And now I walk alone.
Copyright ©
drapes
... [
2007-01-18 07:43:03]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: Side Street
(User Rating: 1 )
by NoSaint on
Thursday, 18th January 2007 @ 09:26:13 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
well written
Shari |
|
|
Re: Side Street
(User Rating: 1 )
by NoSaint on
Thursday, 18th January 2007 @ 09:26:55 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
well written
Shari |
|
|
Re: Side Street
(User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on
Thursday, 18th January 2007 @ 09:52:12 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
wow this is short but very powerful.. I really liked the ending.. this is so full of passion and emotion.. great job
vampyress Jenni |
|
|
Re: Side Street
(User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on
Thursday, 18th January 2007 @ 11:44:01 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
A wonderful job.
Michelle |
|
|
Re: Side Street
(User Rating: 1 )
by Crow on
Thursday, 18th January 2007 @ 01:01:44 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| drapes this is so lonesome, how we can say so much in so few words..excellent work. Crow |
|
|
Re: Side Street
(User Rating: 1 )
by Misunderstood_gurl on
Thursday, 18th January 2007 @ 02:38:37 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
An amazing job. I really enjoyed reading this. It was short...but still effective nontheless.
The sun's now set
And fails to rise.
And now I walk alone.
I love that part. It was by far my favorite part. Great job and keep it up. ^_^ |
|
|
Re: Side Street
(User Rating: 1 )
by deadheadpoet on
Thursday, 18th January 2007 @ 11:06:18 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
"And now I walk alone"
Wow that line really hit it hard.
That was just one hell of a good little piece there...I really enjoyed the read.
Thanks for sharing.
Peace, Laura |
|
|
Re: Side Street
(User Rating: 1 )
by Bishop_008 on
Sunday, 21st January 2007 @ 11:47:37 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| Great writing. |
|
|
Re: Side Street
(User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 12th April 2014 @ 09:42:39 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
well written, simply exquisite, my favorite of yours,
hugs n' love nessa |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
