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Forever Lost
Contributed by
misunderstood_gurl
on
Wednesday, 17th January 2007 @ 08:52:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Every uncertain glance your way
Makes me sick to my stomache
My pulse quickens and my heart stops
As I hear you approaching.
(No one can save me from you.)
I notice that same soft voice
Whenever you talk about her
There's a familar spark in your eyes
Whenever she's around.
(Why can't I let it go?)
She doesn't deserve you
But you don't seem to understand
She's clueless and cold-hearted
But you keep trying to get through.
(Just give it up already.)
Have you erased all our memories
Forgotten every embrace
Disregarded every kiss
Until we're only left with broken promises?
(Was it nothing to you?)
I regret that I gave you a key
That I trusted no other with
But you shattered my heart
And left me with nothing but the pieces.
(The key to my heart is forever lost.)
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Re: Forever Lost
(User Rating: 1 ) by Drapes on
Thursday, 18th January 2007 @ 07:26:46 AM AEST (User
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WOW. Very emotional. I can really feel the saddness in this write. I have read many poems about this same situation but none were as well written as this. I like the word choice and the style. The way you wrote this made it stand above all others. I for one, also know first hand the situation you're in and you described it amazingly. Much better than I could do. A very well write indeed! And the best of luck to you.
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