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Seasons
Contributed by
ell_03
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Wednesday, 17th January 2007 @ 06:42:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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Last summer we were friends, laughing the day away.
This fall we're enemies, what did I do or say?
I hope that by this winter, you'll still remember me.
And maybe when spring comes, hopefully I'll see,
What I did to you, and you'll forgive whatever I've done.
And maybe by next summer, we'll be laughing in the sun.
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ell_03
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2007-01-17 18:42:59]
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Re: Seasons
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by SmileSkinDeep on
Wednesday, 17th January 2007 @ 06:58:38 PM AEST
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It's pretty short, I'm not a publisher nor do I know any but they may want a longer poem. I personally think its pretty good!
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Re: Seasons
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by Drapes on
Saturday, 27th January 2007 @ 02:24:41 PM AEST
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| Another one that I can't even begin to tell you how perfect it is. You're amazing! I can't help you, but good luck with publishing! |
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