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Contributed by jyssvw22 on Wednesday, 17th January 2007 @ 04:30:58 PM in AEST
Topic: oops



You have just lost a friend
One who cared about you deeply
One who has loved you
Thought about you
And treated you kindly
Would fight for you
Lie for you
And follow you blindly

You have just threw us away
Taken the memories and let them rot into decay
Held me by the throat as your sword of words slay
All of your energy expended into tiredness and hate
Over nothing, something trivial, immature, my bad, my mistake

If it was ever anything
It has turned to waste
And can not be saved
Revived or replayed
So little time
Dust and grime
Pitch black of a cave
A hush fell over your lips
As I begged you to stay
Begged you to place
Your heart beside mine
And not run away

This is my fault
Sometimes
Feelings get caught
And turn ordinary people
Into these monsters of hope
Out of this scope
So soft rope chokes
Holds close
Loose thoughts
Pure salt
I pour more
On wounds
To consume
Eating away
Blacking the room
A linger of perfume
Holds still in the air
It loiters
Then drops
Into a pit of despair
Commit to desires
Lit is the fire
Which burns
And returns
To a solemn vow of silence
Where words
Are cheap
Touching provides the heat
Meet me in the restaurant
At a quarter to three
Reserved back seat
Order anything you like to eat

Drink until content
Satiate in my presence
Be beautiful in my space
Cruel with love as its only trace
Seductive is a word misplaced
Compared with angels
Essentially equal
A rare taste
Spit back
In my face

Embarrassed
Disgraced

Composed but battered
I hurt where nothing matters
Glass souls shatter
A million and one fragments
Illuminate the sun
Brilliance dictates the flow
A downward spiral
With a crocodile
Below
In denial
Of pontential foes
Not all are honest
Moral creatures with toes
Fingers to count lovers
Hooks to hang their cloths
Books to feed the brain through the nose

I left
And watched you go


________
____




Copyright © jyssvw22 ... [ 2007-01-17 16:30:58]
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Re: it (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 17th January 2007 @ 11:31:19 PM AEST
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Sad but well written still it happens.
huggs,
emy


Re: it (User Rating: 1 )
by Drapes on Thursday, 18th January 2007 @ 07:47:10 AM AEST
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Wow, interesting. Very emotional, I could feel the saddness through your words. Very well written and excellent word choice. Nicely done.
-Drapes




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