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confused and distorted
Contributed by
Phantomvampyress
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Wednesday, 17th January 2007 @ 03:33:56 PM in AEST
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Confused and contorted
Everyone in my eyes is distorted
aborting love
filling up with hate
as you drown in a thoughtless drunken state
the black clouds raise up and it rains of mistakes
bleeding out of your mouth the rage flows within and surfaces out
grasping onto anyone standing in the way
Vampyress jenni
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Phantomvampyress
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Re: confused and distorted
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by jerseysue on
Wednesday, 17th January 2007 @ 04:56:42 PM AEST
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| This is a sad and desperate write. I feel the pain and hurt in your words. You express all your emotions here. Sue x |
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Re: confused and distorted
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by yangdantien on
Wednesday, 17th January 2007 @ 09:13:39 PM AEST
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Blessed Be, a years gone by and you can hold this at arms length and take a really good look...
tight, sad, scared, dark, twisted, misanthropic, self-defeating perhaps all en route to a deeper understanding about being alive...
Thank You for Posting
Peace
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Re: confused and distorted
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by Clarity_Rising on
Thursday, 18th January 2007 @ 01:38:54 PM AEST
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Another beautifully written
poem. You express your
emotions very eloquently.
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Re: confused and distorted
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by myheartsvoice on
Thursday, 18th January 2007 @ 02:19:01 PM AEST
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This is very nice, quite a bit of wisdom going on here. Time may heal but it can also cloud one's perspective. I like your style of presentation btw.
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Re: confused and distorted
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Thursday, 18th January 2007 @ 06:01:12 PM AEST
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Jenni~ I'm so glad these are old feelings my dear friend. You have expressed yourself so well in your write. An emotional piece of writing penned so well. A rainbow of happiness to brighten up your down days my friend.
love n hugs,
sue m |
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Re: confused and distorted
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by seafire on
Saturday, 20th January 2007 @ 09:40:17 PM AEST
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HMM sounds like you were trying to make decisions in your life . things were making you sad but this is a great piece of work your a great poet i enjoy your poetry keep on writing
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Re: confused and distorted
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by zenith66 on
Monday, 22nd January 2007 @ 01:48:35 PM AEST
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simply brilliant, an insight to thought, its dark tone and honesty made me feel for you.
Remember,
It's your life, no regrets,
Dont' look back and want to forget.
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