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She's My Beautiful.
Contributed by
Bleedthelove
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Wednesday, 17th January 2007 @ 03:02:17 PM in AEST
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Then I saw beautiful
And opened up my eyes
When I found beautiful
It opened up my life
Now I know beautiful
And how things should be
You are my beautiful
Beautiful to me
if you knew her the way that i do
you'd realize thaT she's
more than a girl
she has this way of
looking right through me
and making me feel
that there's good in this world
like the way that she moves
so perfect
and i still don't regret it
laid my life on the line just to get it
Come back down
Be around and i'll be home again
Cross my heart Close my eyes, as I fall into You
Be all that I need from You
I never knew You'd take the opportunity to know someone like me
All of me rests in You,
You're my shield
Hear me, all that I am is You
So come back down,
Be around and I'll be yours once more...
Around and we'll be closer still
Faith like a rock,
The size of a seed,
Eternal life,
It's all you need
Work your will,
My life is yours,
My faith in you will never die
Live fast,
Die slow
Stand back,
Let go
Choose life
You'll see,
Live eternally
Forever, I trust in you.
Copyright ©
Bleedthelove
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2007-01-17 15:02:17]
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Re: She's My Beautiful.
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by PhantomVampyress on
Wednesday, 17th January 2007 @ 03:10:36 PM AEST
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lovely write.. beautifully worded.. such devotion.. all people should have this much devotion to the ones they love the world would be a better place with less heartache.. you should always think of your beloved that way.. beautifully written
Vampyress jenni |
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Re: She's My Beautiful.
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by cnstallion on
Wednesday, 17th January 2007 @ 03:15:08 PM AEST
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| Although it might be to late for this..because I think you have already fallen pretty hard beyond the point of leaving unscathed... I would recommend you run this girls name in google and the national criminal database...both found online.. and also varify her birthplace...she could be a migrant worker luring you in to marriage to get legal residency...... hehehe Just kidding.. great read.. she sounds really special.. congrats.. |
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Re: She's My Beautiful.
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by priss on
Wednesday, 17th January 2007 @ 06:15:35 PM AEST
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| wow, what a beautiful poem. i wonder if she cried when she read it. loved it! |
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Re: She's My Beautiful.
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by priss on
Wednesday, 17th January 2007 @ 06:16:33 PM AEST
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| wow, what a beautiful poem. i wonder if she cried when she read it. loved it! |
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Re: She's My Beautiful.
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 19th January 2007 @ 07:01:19 PM AEST
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| simply beautiful. its so intense. i love it |
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Re: She's My Beautiful.
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by SaintzAndSinnerz on
Saturday, 20th January 2007 @ 11:21:28 PM AEST
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| I can feel the love eminate from your words. such love is rare, she is a lucky lady. |
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Re: She's My Beautiful.
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by UrMyInspiration on
Wednesday, 24th January 2007 @ 07:40:19 PM AEST
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Did she cry when she read it? She is very lucky. You have a wonderful talent...
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