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A new Rose colored Road
Contributed by
brew
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Wednesday, 17th January 2007 @ 01:47:47 PM in AEST
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A memory of many happenings
Take you back to a time of bliss
A time when nothing , was a worry
Everything flowed correctly
Then paths of of destruction, began...
You sit back and wonder how and why
Where did the happiness go
Did it ever stop...Maybe just come to a standstill
Now, you watch a new path
You ponder and want to approach...
with caution
A black and white path, now with colors
Colors of happiness, and new ideas
The flowing has returned
To cross a whole open road of
Bliss, once again
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brew
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Re: A new Rose colored Road
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by cnstallion on
Wednesday, 17th January 2007 @ 01:58:13 PM AEST
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| That was really pretty.... although you made relationships sound like vicious cycles... I imagine they can be...but I would also say it depends on your partner....:-) Either way...very pretty poem.. |
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Re: A new Rose colored Road
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by yangdantien on
Wednesday, 17th January 2007 @ 02:36:33 PM AEST
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Really loved the intent of this piece which I affirm whole heartedly.
Well Done
Peace
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Re: A new Rose colored Road
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 17th January 2007 @ 03:13:01 PM AEST
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Nice, brew, really nice. I love how ya put that rose color to yer outlook. Makes things better, more "blissful". Good work.
wabl
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Re: A new Rose colored Road
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by PhantomVampyress on
Wednesday, 17th January 2007 @ 03:22:41 PM AEST
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wow this is a truthful write.. it gives you that feeling of how things begin again and sometimes you think its bright but yet it ends all the same like a cycle.. this is a quite wise write.. awesome job
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Re: A new Rose colored Road
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Thursday, 18th January 2007 @ 06:22:21 PM AEST
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It's always a pleasure to visit your pages my dear friend. I have missed you & your poetry. As always you deliver an impressive write penned and expressed so well. Good to see you posting again my sweet friend.
love n hugs,
sue m
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Re: A new Rose colored Road
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by jyssvw22 on
Thursday, 18th January 2007 @ 06:51:24 PM AEST
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you took me down the highway of life, and brought me back again.
nice write as usual-
your friend |
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Re: A new Rose colored Road
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 29th January 2007 @ 08:47:35 PM AEST
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Oh my dear friend, Dayna! Your hopeful heart is one of the
earth's most beautiful pleasures, hun. (And of course,
your advice, as always is so on the mark! )
If poems where houses, I'd want to live in one of yours. :)
Perfectly inspiring!
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Re: A new Rose colored Road
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by myheartsvoice on
Sunday, 15th April 2007 @ 12:37:58 AM AEST
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Some times the past can be safer and a most addicting place especially if the memories are of good ones i guess it all depends what happens at that place and time in one's life. as usual though your writting has me in it's clutches with it's fascinating charm and wit. Beautiful as always dayna.
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Re: A new Rose colored Road
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by MILLER_GENUINE_SWINE on
Thursday, 19th April 2007 @ 04:46:53 AM AEST
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| WE ALL NEED A NEW PATH AT TIMES THE ONE I HAVE CHOSEN IS LEADING ME TO FOERVER HAPPYNESS |
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Re: A new Rose colored Road
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 19th April 2007 @ 04:58:33 AM AEST
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you took me back to when i was happy, thank you....
although not for myself, your poem leaves one hopeful,
love n' hugs nessa |
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