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Mindless Chaos.
Contributed by
FRANCO
on
Wednesday, 17th January 2007 @ 09:31:21 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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In the midst of Mindless fanatic chaos,
drowned yet another innocent soul
in his own warm blood, held
in his eyes a fresh vision of life;
his squeal unheard.
Minute after minutes
every passing minute
million drown squeal unheard,
yet it matters dirt for those
sited up else-where in their warm
cozy cells.
Passing command
to kill and kidnap, to rip and rape
innocent souls, in the midst
of a mindless fanatic chaos.
Shrieking weathered mothers,
sobbing young wives perhaps a
soothing soft music lulls
those evil imps to nap.
Wake up from thy chaotic
gloomy world,
spill not another drop
of your beloved’s blood
to quench their greedy
thirst.
Crush the heinous
seed sown in your heart,
hate not but love your
brothers; to see, the sea of joy
engulf your gloomy world
forever beyond time.
-FRANCO-
Copyright ©
FRANCO
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2007-01-17 09:31:21]
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Re: Mindless Chaos.
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by yangdantien on
Wednesday, 17th January 2007 @ 03:06:58 PM AEST
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May that seashore be ever in sight or ear shot.
Well Done
Peace
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Re: Mindless Chaos.
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by Clarity_Rising on
Wednesday, 17th January 2007 @ 03:43:48 PM AEST
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Excellent exploration of the evils
of humanity. Your ending few lines
are filled with wisdom. Another
beautiful write!
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Re: Mindless Chaos.
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 12th March 2007 @ 01:44:21 PM AEST
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I regret that I found this piece of yours to be a very well penned definition of modernity. Wish it weren't so, but we, as humanity, have got some evolvin' t' do 'fore it ain't so. Good work, Franco.
wabl
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