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Restless
Contributed by
kishdaswani
on
Wednesday, 17th January 2007 @ 03:24:58 AM in AEST
Topic:
insomniac
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In the midnight of restless sleep,
I awake to the sound of darkness,
My mind is in too deep,
Limited energy I try to harness,
The curtains unfold,
The stars shine brightly,
Proud and magnificent in the shivering cold,
Turning my glance ever so slightly,
Thoughts of heroic battles,
Daring adventures,
Horsement rounding up cattle,
Right up into greener pastures,
The past I often visit,
Hardly of mine,
Difficult to imagine how i often miss it,
Like a rusty can of tin,
It will always make a noise when i kick it.
Copyright ©
kishdaswani
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2007-01-17 03:24:58]
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Re: Restless
(User Rating: 1 )
by deadheadpoet on
Wednesday, 17th January 2007 @ 10:38:44 AM AEST
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Well done. Darn, I really liked this piece. I'd quote different parts that I think are fantastic but I'd be rewriting much. Good insomniac poetry. I really do love that last stanza and last line. Thanks for sharing.
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Re: Restless
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by deadheadpoet on
Wednesday, 17th January 2007 @ 10:39:07 AM AEST
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Well done. Darn, I really liked this piece. I'd quote different parts that I think are fantastic but I'd be rewriting much. Good insomniac poetry. I really do love that last stanza and last line. Thanks for sharing.
Peace, Laura |
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