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Banner
Contributed by
Man_On_High
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Wednesday, 17th January 2007 @ 12:08:56 AM in AEST
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Long after days, seasons, peoples and countries,
the banner of raw meat against the silk of seas
and flowers, still do not exist.
Recovered from the old fanfare of heroism,
which still attack my heart and head;
far from the old assasins.
Live embers raining in gusts of frost..
Oh, Bliss!
..fires in the rain on the winds of diamonds,
flung out by the earth's heart,
eternally shining for us.
Oh, world!
..far from the old retreats and old flames,
still heard.. and so much, the same.
Thresh the foam in music and veerings of chasms;
clash icicles against the stars!
Oh, bliss!
World and music and forms sweat;
eyes and long hair floating there-
white tears, boiling..
and the feminine voice, reaching
to the bottom of volcanos,
deep, to the grotto in my many seas.
B
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Re: Banner
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 17th January 2007 @ 12:11:25 AM AEST
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and Bliss this is Billy, softly it floats so lovely.
Michelle |
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by FRANCO on
Wednesday, 17th January 2007 @ 12:27:46 AM AEST
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lovely yet thought provoking poem, good work Friend.
FRANCO. |
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by Fionndruinne on
Wednesday, 17th January 2007 @ 03:00:14 AM AEST
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Vivid and inspiring images here. Very well done, as ever, Billy.
The first couple of stanzas seem to employ a little mismatching verb tense/number, but I may be mistaken. Tired as I am.
Slainte.
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by brew on
Wednesday, 17th January 2007 @ 07:59:16 AM AEST
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Wonderful write...Loved reading the words penned that were very blissful. Always a pleasure to read something, penned by yourself. Hope all is ok, and glad to see you writing again. Send me a couple of lines, letting me know a dear friend, is ok.!
Hugs
Brew~ |
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by Sagefairy on
Wednesday, 17th January 2007 @ 05:02:00 PM AEST
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| I enjoyed this with it's contrast between hot and cold. And deeply touching the earth's soul in it too.. Lovely work! Blessings, J. |
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 17th January 2007 @ 11:43:33 PM AEST
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Good work, my friend as always.
huggs,
emy |
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 18th January 2007 @ 11:25:13 AM AEST
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Wow, full of great passion and deep feelings.
Very intense! |
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by Alison on
Thursday, 18th January 2007 @ 02:21:43 PM AEST
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| great write! very powerful and moving. awesome!! |
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by yangdantien on
Thursday, 18th January 2007 @ 03:17:01 PM AEST
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This is excellent. I very much liked:
"Thresh the Foam in Music..."
That stays rolling in my head...
"Follow Your Bliss." J. Campbell
Thank You
Peace
Yangdantien |
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by jyssvw22 on
Thursday, 18th January 2007 @ 06:49:50 PM AEST
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I enjoyed this write for what it brought but more importantly for what it left behind.
Splendid
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Thursday, 18th January 2007 @ 06:53:58 PM AEST
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Dearest Billy, under which rock have you been hiding my dear friend. j/k. A fine poetic master who so graces our hearts with his extraordinary work. I have missed you & your poetry.My POEt friend your work always moves me,touches my heart and leaves me inspired.
May your pen always flow so eloquently with such beautiful masterpieces. Tip of the hat to ya~
love n hugs from ur fan/friend,
sue m |
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by Vampirequeen on
Friday, 19th January 2007 @ 10:25:33 PM AEST
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Nice to see you posting again.
i agree with phil on this piece full of passion.
very nice
hugs |
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 22nd January 2007 @ 07:02:12 PM AEST
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I know I already shared with you what I think of this, sweetheart; the bravery I see ..
but I came here again to read it and found something to add to my initial
observation ..
Your poetry has always held a sort of comfort and compelling captivation for me,
and up til now, I was unsure why. There is much pain and sorrow to be found
among some of your more profound writes, and I am certain now that I know
how and why it touches me so .. it is because there is a barrage of emotional
transfer within your writes- ones that you have such a tremendous skill in
conveying. Your ability to coerce demons into stunning literary magnificence
is an art form- the likes of which, I’ve not yet known in modern day. It is rare to be
able to extract the emotions of pain, fear, sadness, anxiety etc. and truly express them so
the reader gets it. So he feels it! Not all of us have this talent, sweetheart. It is the
select few that can reach down and pull out all that they want to (need to) place
on the page, with the excellence and clarity that you do.. and deep inside the vast
recess of the words, I find you .. always there .. sometimes uncertain, but always
there .. waiting ..as if to be found~
I know certain “luggage”, is burdensome and immensely challenging to sift
through .. but this was beautiful work, my love. Know .. I’m always here for you-
eternally~
I honestly wish, with all I am, that the darkness ALWAYS shall
be smothered, by light .... for you~
yours, far beyond forever~
~ Roxanne
XO
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 22nd July 2007 @ 04:24:49 AM AEST
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I am going to contact this female legal grad and show her your fine poetry (or her fine essays turned into fraudulent poetry by you sir Jack Leg)
YOU ARE A FRAUD! COWARD AND THIEF!
again replace ______ with these letters connected because I can't post it here (c i t i e s)
http://www.geo_____.com/Athens/8161/barbarians.txt |
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