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Breath

Contributed by evolon on Tuesday, 16th January 2007 @ 06:01:46 PM in AEST
Topic: ThankYouPoems



Breath,


Like a child to exit the womb gasping breathing in to
Life

Life, the settled security knowing there will be a tomorrow, but for whom? So we
Hope

Hope, that’s in no way a doubt lay inside you while u rest
Trying

Trying, to give confidence to the fear that I am so much more than your heart could search
For

For, the compassion, intimate, desire to embrace your eyes in mines nothing man made can change my
Love

Love, me the way I feel in my bones and tickles my smiles while I am asleep
Continue

Continue, to do what ever it is that has me in tears to even think of you not by my side we, us, in pure
Form

Form, the cocoon , over my weakness and help my beauty to develop only be born a
New

New, to the bond that made life worth dying
If

If, only to dance, eternity in your sight

Like a child to exit the womb
Your illumination is blinding, you are the glow of life
For so long I have held my breath
Now I am reborn you are my guiding light!

Breath






Copyright © evolon ... [ 2007-01-16 18:01:46]
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Re: Breath (User Rating: 1 )
by spiritwind on Tuesday, 16th January 2007 @ 06:27:34 PM AEST
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Like the way you put this together, nice style. Pretty read.

SW


Re: Breath (User Rating: 1 )
by yangdantien on Tuesday, 16th January 2007 @ 10:27:07 PM AEST
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This is like a poem squared.
A masons layered bricks in textured angles.

Keep Your Pen Flowing

Good Job

Peace
Yangdantien




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