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Walls of Alienation
Contributed by
sunflower
on
Thursday, 20th February 2003 @ 10:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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somber shades of grey
fill the backdrop
of winters emerging
still life,
as familiar meloncholy
descends
with hollow echos
off twisted trees,
that hang in suspense
awaiting the songbirds return,
along with me,
now painted
into this bleachedout
picture of monotones,
waking to
the beauty in the
sadness,
and the sadness
in the beauty
of these unchained walls,
that echo in
alienations freedom,
and somehow,
for a few rare
moments of clarity,
the fog of convulusion
lifts
Copyright ©
sunflower
... [
2003-02-20 22:20:00]
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Re: Walls of Alienation
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by bobotheclown on
Friday, 21st February 2003 @ 01:08:09 AM AEST
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Wow I loved this very well written. The imagery is incredible
waking to
the beauty in the
sadness,
and the sadness
in the beauty
of these unchained walls,
I loved those lines keep on writing.
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: Walls of Alienation
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 21st February 2003 @ 08:37:55 AM AEST
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| Great write, very well put together, Thanks |
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Re: Walls of Alienation
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by Percursors on
Saturday, 22nd February 2003 @ 01:50:34 AM AEST
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| I LOVED IT... it was so good, I had to read it a couple times before I got it but I like poems that make me think and try to figure out what the authors trying to tell me but I gave it 5 stars...this piece is really good u used great descriptive words that gave it a real nice texture and that’s rare! |
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Re: Walls of Alienation
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by DreamWeaver on
Sunday, 23rd February 2003 @ 02:36:53 AM AEST
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| Wow .. great poem ... I love this write .... great imagery. |
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Re: Walls of Alienation
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by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 10:59:36 PM AEST
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| beautiful. |
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