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Something Greater.

Contributed by Bleedthelove on Tuesday, 16th January 2007 @ 09:43:49 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Just fallin' free
Just fall in me
And i'm your coffin
I wait for you
Little sunbeam
I can hear you scream
I can feel your heat now
The rest of my days
Should I stay should I pray
That I'm here now clear now
Live with the fears
To extend my tears
If you like-a-me,
like I like-a-you
And we like-a-both the same,
I like-a say,
this very day,
'Cause I love-a-you
and love-a-you true
And if you-a love-a-me
One live as two,
two live as one
My sea runs red
My trees are dead
My breath runs short
Please report
Is there someone out there
Do you receive me
We go round and round
I won't believe in heaven and hell
No saints, no sinners, no devil as well
No pearly gates, no thorny crown
Dear God
You're always letting us humans down
And if you're up there you'd perceive
That my heart's here upon my sleeve
So where is she, my beau-ti-ful baby
Wherever she may be
I hope she, can hear...me...
if i sing into the sun will she melt into my heart
let me start
i love you
but still nothings clear
i think of when i found you
keep on singin while im drowning
down into that two-tone vision
and now she is my religion
forget the father the son and the holy ghost
she is my god she is my blood
she is what matters most...

she is what matters most.

Copyright © Bleedthelove ... [ 2007-01-16 09:43:49]
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Re: Something Greater. (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Tuesday, 16th January 2007 @ 01:19:43 PM AEST
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beautifully written.. I absoluetley love the ending .. this has a spetacular flow and the wording is superb. beautiful job!! or in my words Enchanting write!!

vampyress Jenni

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