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Seeds of Love
Contributed by
drowningheart
on
Monday, 15th January 2007 @ 09:35:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Walked through a garden
of roses, winter white
fireflies illuminate the night
in this garden, I walked alone
along a path of precious stones
planting seeds of love
to mend this broken heart
the seed that was planted
within my heart,
no longer grows
there I stood exposed
bare and naked
all alone
in this garden of my own.
Copyright ©
drowningheart
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2007-01-15 21:35:09] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Seeds of Love
(User Rating: 1 ) by shelby on
Tuesday, 16th January 2007 @ 06:48:44 PM AEST (User
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Stunning write, a delight and my pleasure to read.
~Michelle~ |
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Re: Seeds of Love
(User Rating: 1 ) by MisfitMe on
Saturday, 20th January 2007 @ 03:56:41 AM AEST (User
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" There is a gate~
it can be guarded...
Well, it is not heaven~
but it has a garden...
Sooo to the red rose~
grows a passion..."~S.Niicks
Thank you for allowing a wonderful memory to bloom anew w/ your, " Seeds of Love"
BigLoveMuchPeace,
~MisfitMe |
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Re: Seeds of Love
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jen54 on
Wednesday, 24th January 2007 @ 11:54:31 PM AEST (User
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wonderful
-Jen |
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Re: Seeds of Love
(User Rating: 1 ) by Bleedthelove on
Thursday, 25th January 2007 @ 11:01:06 AM AEST (User
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I was so moved by this piece. "Fireflies illuminate the night".....yes they do. Beautiful write. |
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Re: Seeds of Love
(User Rating: 1 ) by needledancing on
Monday, 19th March 2007 @ 07:31:11 AM AEST (User
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This is an excellent piece......
planting seeds of love
to mend this broken heart
the seed that was planted
within my heart,
I absolutely love this verse.It is of course how we must plant more seeds when one does not survive the planting....brilliantly put! |
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