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The Rock
Contributed by
amateurwriter
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Monday, 15th January 2007 @ 08:06:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Evil thoughts around my head,
They find a hole and leak way.
My friends next to me start to wonder,
and their feelings towards me they start to ponder.
"Is it possible that I can still talk to her,
the same way I used to, without being afraid?"
If the answer to this is a simple "no",
they'll find a path and away they'll go.
If they're not bothered by these "evil thoughts",
then there's no chance this friendship rotts.
Forever you'll be, my support, my rock...
The one I'll call, if I ever need to talk.
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amateurwriter
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2007-01-15 20:06:13] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: The Rock
(User Rating: 1 ) by yangdantien on
Tuesday, 16th January 2007 @ 01:09:52 PM AEST (User
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A heartfelt ditty that has your missing pieces in those around you as I gather.
It is important to have a "Rock"
someone to call when you 'need to talk.'
Keep Writing, Good Job
Peace
Yangdantien |
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